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My take on a lively debate My first exposure to Marge Piercy's work came at the Science Fiction Shop in lower Manhattan, which carried her novel Woman on the Edge of Time. Not long afterward I picked up her poetry collection The Moon Is Always Female. That book includes three poems that I have recommended time and time again: "For the young who want to," "For Strong Women," and "The Sabbath of Mutual Respect."
The current condition of the publishing industry and the debate raging over self-publishing or not, e-books versus print books, and all the ancillary issues stemming therefrom, brought me back to Piercy's poetry. What follows is my riff on her work, re-stated to fit that debate.
Poem After Marge Piercy's "The Sabbath of Mutual Respect" (You can read Piercy's poem here.)
In the writer's year there come thanksgivings, the completion of drafts and the thrill of acceptance, times when we hone our craft, read the living and the dead, drinking their golden words of vision and toil.
Abundance, the Zone, the pouring of soul, inspiration now and slogging later. After the work emerges, small deaths come in edits. The labor nourishes us, plot and protagonist and continuity, hook and arc, query and synopsis and conflict, all the serviceable pages formatted to market specs, the agents, the publishers, the editors; the products that quicken into paperback and hardcover and e-book, the humbling necessary critique groups, the armies of workshops waving their keynote speakers and networks.
The inspirational how-to essays that focus the yearnings stored in dreams.
The profound sanctuary of work space, backlit laptop, free-flowing ink, smooth paper, the solid desk, the dictionaries exploding awareness with the perfect word.
We praise our craft by submersing in it, reveling in genres in an industry set with chapbooks and contests and blogs, small press and large press and podcasts inside this long economic winter.
Creativity and choice: every novel embarked upon means weeks/months/years of labor. Over-extend and the ideas lose their purchase in a flood of partial drafts. The muse of inspiration is also the restraint of labor and choice.
In another life, dear author, I too would tailor myself to marketplace demands. In another life, my colleague, I too would ride convention waves, exulting in the camaraderie of literature's movable feasts. In another life, dear writer, I too would scatter poems in the streets and throughout the ether, or be born to scribe in private, to the muse of solitude. Praise all our choices. Praise any writer who chooses, and honor that choice.
Whitman, Paine, Dickinson, Piercy, Lorde, Walker, Rushdie, Basho, Melville, McPhee, Butler, Poe, Kafka, the many faces of Anonymous, Tiptree, Asimov, Delaney, Hegi, Roy, Hemingway, Proust, Zelazny, Chandler, Sartre, deBouvoir, Blake, Keats, O'Connor, Pushkin, Kingston, Shakespeare, DuBois, Goethe: their words embody our histories, our perspectives, our passions, the stories that resonate or not with each individual reader. When I consecrate my vision in the temple of expression, when I pledge myself to my writer's instinct mated to the balance of my circumstances I do not choose for you or lessen your choice.
Our real abundance is the power to hold rights or to grant rights, to offer for sale or to freely distribute, to chance the marketplace, to risk our own exposure, and not to have rights taken by stealth or infringement or greed or monopoly or loopholes. To submit work or to self-publish or to not publish is holy. To hack against one's wishes is to risk the soul's deforestation. To have one's vision bastardized is to have your heart cut out. To transgress genre is holy and holy is the freedom of improvisation and precious to write however one can and precious to let the voices grow from silence.
Praise the works you did not write. They will sear you, fuel your stories, exact your truth. You fill the void made by their absence. You heal the heartache of their failure. I tell you after the agony of my creative drought I could delve deeper than I ever had before, freeing myself of the fear of drowning, reaching a layer I despaired I'd never reach. When my friend signed options I hugged her in joy, cherishing the drive she pours into her books, her children of insomnia and deadlines.
Praise our choices, writers, for each missive exacts a toll known to no one but its author who pays in struggle and obsession, rejection, reinterpretation, remaindering, economic and spiritual hazard. Words and ideas are sacred to writers, for we are doorways of heart and we must choose what to risk and how to value. Freedom of expression is our real abundance.
Writers: do as much research into the industry as you can, weigh all of your options as best you can, and in the end do what you believe is right for you. Everyone's situation is unique and one size does not fit all. Rarely, if ever, does anyone operate with full information at their disposal. Every choice involves risk. The important thing is to own one's choices.
Elissa Malcohn's Deviations and Other Journeys
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09:23 pm
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Operation E-Book Drop
 Logo from the imagination and graphic artistry of K.A. M'Lady & P.M. Dittman.
I've spent the past few days reformatting the first three books in my series for Smashwords. On Thanksgiving I uploaded Covenant and Appetite. Next week I'll upload Destiny when I release that book on my website. You can access my main Smashwords page here.
I was drawn to Smashwords because it is the main portal used by Operation E-Book Drop, though I learned today that I can use other free download portals as well. Today I felt honored and humbled to send my first "e-book deployment" to servicemen and women.
In under 24 hours, before I received my OEBD mailing list, Covenant and Appetite had 15 and 18 downloads from Smashwords, respectively. Yesterday Covenant reached the 600 download mark at Manybooks.net, with Appetite at 556 downloads. Thank you, readers!
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07:20 pm
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The Other Weekend On Thursday night I had the car packed for travel to Orlando and ZonaCon. My directions were duct-taped to the dash. I was looking forward to buddying up with Kathy Nappier, making new friends, and having a great time.
Shortly after midnight on Friday, less than 12 hours before I was scheduled to do a reading at ZonaCon, Mary experienced extreme abdominal distress. I'll omit the details, but not long afterward I was driving her to Citrus Memorial Hospital.
Long story short, they took a CT scan, which revealed intestinal blockage and a mystery mass that still hasn't been resolved. They inserted an NG tube and hooked her up to an IV. At about the time I would have arrived in Orlando in an alternate universe, Mary was brought up to her hospital room.
I had my netbook with me and used the hospital's WiFi to e-mail Kathy, Marc over at ZonaCon, and family. And then settled in for a weekend at Citrus Memorial.
Mary was discharged this morning, with a bunch of doc follow-ups and two sheets of dietary restrictions.
Yesterday I posted "Beauty" on my Chronicles from Hurricane Country blog, written for the Sunday Scribblings prompt of the same name, #190:
Beauty is Mary, napping in the hospital room in which I type this.
Beauty is the plate of soft solid foods she had for lunch: sweet potato, pork, cooked broccoli and cauliflower, applesauce, soft roll, and coffee. Beauty is her appetizer, a shot of medicine to help intestinal motility.
Beauty is the IV bag she no longer needs and that was here when she needed it.
Beauty is the container of bile hanging on the wall above her bed, because the bile is no longer in her. Beauty is the NG tube that removed it.
Beauty is the hospital staff, the nurses and doctors attending, the physical therapist. Beauty is her roommate and her roommate's visitors.
Beauty is the friends, family, and well-wishers whose messages fly to me here. Beauty is the Internet beaming their good words, and the social networking sites in which those words reside. Beauty is the hospital's WiFi, the netbook on my lap. Beauty is connectivity.
Beauty is the roiling clouds beyond the hospital windows, the intricate storm layers we admire on our slow walks around the floor. The steady rain our county needs. Beauty is the shelter of the hospital, the umbrella I'd brought up from the car when it was still dry outside.
Beauty is catching up on sleep, after the emergency that brought us here.
Beauty is the holiday lights strung along State Road 44 in the heart of Inverness, which lifted my spirits in the bleary night when I drove Mary here. Beauty is the traffic lights that shone on that harrowing way in: green green green green green.
Beauty is the hello meows and purrs from Daisy, played on the beautiful digital recorder I've used to transport our cat's voice here.
Beauty is the hospital cafeteria and its healthy salads that keep me in good working order.
Beauty is living in the moment, trusting in the moment, and waiting for what the future brings.
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01:18 am
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Catching Up: Necronomicon

On October 23-25, 2009, I attended Necronomicon, the Tampa/St. Petersburg area's science fiction/fantasy/horror convention. Thanks again to coordinator Ann Morris and volunteers for a fabulous event!
At my table I had: 1. IPPY Silver Medal-winner Riffing on Strings: Creative Writing Inspired by String Theory (Scriblerus Press), which contains my story "Arachne." 2. Bram Stoker Award-winner Unspeakable Horror: From the Shadows of the Closet (Dark Scribe Press), which contains my story "Memento Mori." 3. Hugo Award-winner Electric Velocipede, which contains my story "Hermit Crabs." ("Hermit Crabs" is also on the recommended reading list in The Year's Best Science Fiction, 26th Annual Edition.) 4. October/November 2009 issue of Asimov's, which contains my novelette "Flotsam" and poem "Derivative Work." 5. The first edition of Deviations: Covenant (Aisling Press)s. 6. CDs containing e-books of Covenant and its sequel, Appetite (books are also available for free download here). 7. Brochures for Broad Universe. 8. Flyers for the Science Fiction Poetry Association.
I was also on four panels: "Chasing Dreams: How I Came to be a Writer" (moderating, with guests of honor Catherine Asaro, Patricia Briggs, and Richard Lee Byers); "What is Art's Place in Society?"; "E-Book formats & DRM Methods;" and "Genre Jumping, Round Two."
( More photos follow. )
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06:46 pm
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Citrus County Library Events: Halloween Horrorfest and NaNoWriMo Kickoff
 Photo credit: Jim Ehlers of the Citrus County Library System.
(My Necronomicon report is coming soon!)
The library held its Halloween Horrorfest on October 29. I gave readings, answered questions, and did book signings along with Belea Keeney (at left, outfitted as Tippi Hedren's character in Hitchcock's The Birds) and K.L. Nappier (next to Belea). I'm third from the left, followed by Citrus County Library director Flossie Benton Rogers.
I hadn't dressed in costume for about 25 years and hadn't worn makeup for almost that long, so arrived at the Homosassa Library early to practice. This self-portrait comes courtesy of the library's bathroom mirror.

My nails, painted the night before, survived a full night's sleep and some heavy-duty typing that morning, but my left thumbnail paint chipped when I tried to remove the safety seal on my purple lipstick. Fortunately, I'd brought the polish with me for any needed touch-ups.
My hair has thinned considerably over the years, but I could still create some witchy frizz by setting my washed hair in many tiny braids overnight, unbraiding, and brushing vigorously. I uploaded this shot about an hour before the event, using the library's WiFi. It got me a few stares, and a couple of people didn't recognize me -- but when a toddler smiled, waved, and called, "Hi!" I concluded I wasn't very frightening.
Usually I look as I do in this flyer for the event, minus the orange tint:

More legible in the large view.

Author book display. Left of the pumpkins: K.L.Nappier's Full Wolf Moon and its sequel Bitten, along with three Twisted Tails anthologies in which her work appears. Right of the pumpkins: anthologies Florida Horror and The Beast Within, in which Belea Keeney's work appears; followed by my work in anthologies Riffing on Strings: Creative Writing Inspired by String Theory and Unspeakable Horror: From the Shadows of the Closet, magazines Electric Velocipede and Asimov's, and my novel Deviations: Covenant.

The library's book display included general writing guides and guides to writing horror.
Back on the 19th, I joined Loretta Rogers and Belea for the library's NaNoWriMo Kickoff at its Lakes Region/Inverness branch:
 Photo credit here and below: Karen Slaska of the Citrus County Library System.
Belea spoke about creating a setting, Loretta spoke about genre and establishing story components, and I spoke about social networking for writers. An online version of my handout, with live links, is here.

Thanks to Flossie, Jim, Karen, Susan Mutschler, the fabulous folks who decorated the Homosassa community room, the staffs at Homosassa and Inverness, and all our attendees for a couple of great events! Belea, Loretta, and I will team up at the library again -- this time at the Central Ridge branch -- on November 13 for the "Write-In," the second of our three-part NaNoWriMo series.
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Tags: belea keeney, citrus county library, halloween, horror, k.l. nappier, loretta c. rogers, nanowrimo
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09:21 pm
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Conversations LIVE! Author Panel Transcript Stay tuned for reports on Citrus County Library events and Necronomicon.
On Thursday, October 22, I joined author panelists Brian Rathbone, Arlene Radasky, Mark Eller, and Rhonda Carpenter and host Cyrus A. Webb on Conversations LIVE! Our topic was "The Business of Books: Fantasy"
Thanks to Cyrus and to my fellow panelists for a great show! You can hear it here.
( Transcript follows )
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12:30 am
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On Tap for October 10/19, 5 p.m. ET: NaNoWriMo (November Novelists) Kickoff at the Lakes Region Library in Inverness, FL. I'll join authors Belea Keeney and Loretta C. Rogers. Our presentations will address aspects of the craft and business of writing. You can read more about the library's November Novelists program here (.pdf file).
10/22, 8 p.m. ET: Conversations LIVE!, hosted by Cyrus A. Webb and presented by The Write Stuff Literacy Campaign. I'll join Brian Rathbone, Rhonda Carpenter, and Arlene Radasky on an author panel for "The Business of Books: Fantasy."
10/23-25: Necronomicon, St. Petersburg, FL. I'll be on the following panels: "Chasing Dreams: How I Came to be a Writer" (moderating), "What is Art's Place in Society?", "E-Book formats & DRM Methods," and "Genre Jumping." You can also find me behind a vendor table in Author Alley.
10/29, 5 p.m. ET: Halloween Horrorfest, Homosassa Library, Homosassa, FL. I'll be a panelist/reader and will do book signings with Belea Keeney and K.L. Nappier.
In other news...
Lois Tilton recommends my story "Flotsam" (Oct./Nov. Asimov's over at The Internet Review of Science Fiction.
Shaun Duke promotes Covenant here. He's got a neat Book Magnet Project going on -- now that he has a fridge he can call his own, he wants to cover it in science fiction/fantasy book magnets.
My cover for Appetite is up at the New Covey Cover Awards site. Click here for my entry, here for all the October entrants.
Thanks again to Manybooks.net, one of several sites carrying the Deviations series (since May 2009). Earlier this month, the number of Covenant downloads at Manybooks crossed the 500-mark and the number of Appetite downloads topped 475.
Thanks also to --
-- Merrilee Faber, for promoting online works, including mine, at the e-Fiction Book Club.
-- Gary Farber, my friend and elementary school classmate, for his good words over at Amygdala.
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10:12 pm
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Nelson G. Williams, 1926-2009
 "Grandpa" Nelson G. Williams at home in June 2006
Within a month of moving to Florida, I joined Inverness Writers, a critique group located in the seat of Citrus County. There I met "Grandpa" Nelson G. Williams, one of the workshop's founding members.
Inverness Writers invited all genres. I and a couple of others brought science fiction and fantasy, but we also workshopped historicals, young adult fiction, mysteries, poetry, memoir, and other works. Nelson's specialty was focused and deep: standard-gauge model trains. I don't know how many articles he ultimately published in magazines like The Lion Roars (Lionel Trains) or The Layout (Train Collectors Association, Southern Division). He published in four national train collector club magazines alone over the course of decades, enough to earn him the title of "Tinplate Tycoon," the TCA's highest honor, in 2003.
Reading Nelson's articles taught me a brand new vocabulary. The following comes from his article, "Two Dorfans in One Season," The Train Collectors Quarterly, October 1996 (read the .pdf here). This seems to be an old OCR conversion, so I've taken my best guess at correcting software mis-translations.
"Why was I so excited about getting a Dorfan freight train?
"I collect only 2-1/2-inch Standard gauge tinplate trains - the classics made before World War II, and the modern trains built since 1965. I already had nearly all the Lionel freights since 1910, an Ives and an American Flyer, and a few passenger sets. But I still needed a Dorfan (and a Boucher) to complete my collection of classic freights.
"Dorfan was founded In 1924 by Milton and Julius Forchhelmer, cousins of Joseph Kraus and former executives of his toy company in Nuremburg. Kraus himself emigrated to the United States about 1930. Their trains were named after their mothers, Dora and Fanny, being called 'Fandor' In Europe and 'Dorfan' in America. Otherwise, the Dorfan company in New Jersey was completely independent. At first [Dorfan] designed and built 0 gauge trains, adding Standard gauge about 1927.
"Their idea was to market trains as educational toys. The engines were designed so a boy with a screwdriver could put the halves of the body together or take them apart. He could service the motor himself, and learn some basic facts about electricity."
Many of Nelson's articles focused on teaching younger readers a history of train collecting. Some incorporated personal details within the hobby and its supporting trades, letting readers see into the lives of Glenn Gerhard, "Red" Forney, the McCoys, and other model train builders who turned their passion into a business. Nelson kept in personal contact with these pioneers and their families. The following comes from a draft I've pulled from my workshop notes, of Nelson's article, "Glenn Gerhard and the Trains He Built."
"Glenn's father got his son a 'Baby State Set' from the Lionel factory at Irvington when Glenn was three. Later, Glenn salvaged a 10E locomotive and a flat car from a neighbor's fire. Dad cut a yardstick to make the flat car into a gondola with wooden sides and ends, like the first car Joshua Lionel Cowen made in 1901. Glenn chose the 'Lionel Handbook for Model Builders' as his Christmas present in 1941 and a 512 gondola in 1942. After the war he got a green Lionel 517 caboose at Macy's.
"Glenn was too ill to attend school at ages 13-14, and spent time making his own rolling stock. As a Boy Scout project, he made a Pennsylvania Railroad X29 out of wood, with balsa doors and a button for the brake wheel. He also built a boxcar from a wooden cheese box, a 65-foot mill gondola of cardboard, and an H0 Atlantic steam locomotive of wood and cardboard on a hand-filed brass frame, with a Mantua motor, drivers, and gears.
"Such a boyhood might have led Glenn Gerhard to go to work for a railroad, but history and life are not that logical. Instead of riding the rails, he became an over-the-road truck driver, hauling goods over interstate highways as a lifetime career."
Nelson's love of model trains stemmed from a long family tradition, which he wrote about in "A Century of Toy Trains in my Family," The Layout 43(3), Summer 2009 (read the .pdf here).
"Within my own family I am Grandpa Nelson III. There were not just three generations between us, but six generations of toy trains among us in the 20th century. Our first one was a cast iron locomotive that Dr. Hezekiah Wallace Nelson gave to my father 100 years ago. That was soon after Joshua Lionel Cohen built his first 2-7/8" gauge freight cars and trolleys.
"I never saw my father’s locomotive, but it was probably an Ives because it smoked his Grandpa Nelson’s cigar in its smokestack. The cigar was kept puffing by a bellows with connecting rods to the big drive wheels. It was a holiday gift, perhaps when Dr. Nelson lived with Grace’s family several years before his death in 1913.
"I still have the next toy train in our family. It was a Lionel 2-1/4" standard gauge freight set purchased in 1937 at the J.L. Hudson store in Detroit. My father was all thumbs, but he set up a circle of track around the Christmas tree, wired the transformer and rheostat correctly, and showed us how to run it ourselves. He may never have touched it again but he loved to hear its whistle over the telephone when he was on the road as a travelling salesman."
 Nelson's first train, which I believe was manufactured in 1903.
Nelson was also active in transporting portions of his vast collection to exhibits around Florida, another subject in his articles. "Little Generals of the Civil War" (The Layout, 43(2), Spring 2009; read the .pdf here) guides the reader through the story of The General ("kidnapped from the Big Shanty depot northwest of Atlanta in 1862 By Andrew’s Raiders") and then through a variety of model trains copying the famous locomotive.
"My display of small models of the General was seen by more than 3500 visitors during the 13th annual 'Trains at the Holidays' in December at Ocala. I also showed most of my 'Gondolas, Hoppers, and Dump Cars' there. The major operating layouts of the Ocala Model Railroad Club and the Ocala 3-Railers were their largest ever at Central Florida Community College."
Nelson also brought some of his trains to our meetings at Lakes Region Library, and hosted meetings in his home on those few occasions when the library closed for staff training.
A retired lawyer, Nelson had also been a newspaperman, textbook author, and award-winning college editor. Throughout the brief years I was privileged to know him, I most remember his generosity, hand-in-hand with his bluntness. As a critique partner he was not one to mince words, but he took as good as he gave. He was a man of striking joie de vivre who lived life to the fullest, regardless of what life dished out. I remember his humor and wit, and his unfailing service in myriad capacities -- in law and politics, in the Parkinson's support group for which he and his longtime partner Alice (deceased) volunteered, and elsewhere, in addition to the TCA. I remember an at-times cocky demeanor that didn't quite hide a modest soul. Nelson chaired Inverness Writers from the time I joined in 2003 until his death earlier this week.

My photo of the 1969 TCA National Convention Car appeared in The Layout 40(4), Fall 2006 (Vol. 40 No. 4), accompanying Nelson's article, "40th Anniversary Trains: The Real McCoys 1966-98."
Nelson did not write for pay, but he loved what he did.
You can see my full photoset of Nelson's train collection here.
A Video of Nelson's Trains
My heartfelt condolences go out to Nelson's family and friends, and to my fellow workshop-mates who knew him.
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Tags: articles, inverness writers, nelson g. williams, remembrance, train collecting
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09:56 pm
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Asimov's Contributor Copies

My Asimov's contributor copies have arrived. This issue contains my poem "Derivative Work" and novelette "Flotsam." Took this photo at the post office, soon as I ripped off the plastic wrap. :-)
From the intro to "Flotsam": "Elissa Malcohn burst into our pages in November 1984 with her intensely powerful story 'Lazuli.' Although another tale appeared in our Mid-December 1986 issue, we've been waiting twenty-three years for the third. We're delighted that the hiatus ends with 'Flotsam,' a story that was partly informed by Elissa's employment at a government contractor during some of those intervening years."
My story in the mid-December 1986 Asimov's was "The S.O.B Show," a fond spoof informed by five years of volunteer planetarium work. The title took its name from the field's nickname for the "Star of Bethlehem," or Christmas, show.
"Lazuli," a science fictional treatment of childhood sexual abuse and my first professional sale, single-handedly placed me on the final ballot for the 1985 John W. Campbell Award.
Mary and I have been hunting for the planet Uranus.

Image courtesy of About.com.
Uranus reached opposition on the 17th, which means it's up in the sky all night -- located just south of the Circlet, an asterism in Pisces. (An asterism is part of a constellation that's recognizeable in and of itself. The Big Dipper is an asterism in the constellation of Ursa Major.) Here, Uranus is represented by the bluegreen circle with an arrow pointing up.
Here's a close-up of the Circlet and Uranus's position:

Graphic courtesy of the Isle of Man Astronomical Society.
Earlier this week the sky was clear around midnight (enough to see the Milky Way), so we were out with binoculars and our Astroscan. I'm still not sure if I found Uranus, but I think I may have. I pushed the Astroscan to just about its maximum magnification capacity (around 200x) and thought I barely saw a disc, which would indicate a planet rather than a star. Then again, the Astroscan is a bear to focus when the magnification is that high. The night was very still, to the point where I couldn't tell what twinkled and what didn't.
While we were outside, we got in a good look at Jupiter and its Galilean moons (all four were visible, two to either side of the planet), along with the Andromeda galaxy. By about 1 AM some haze had crept in.
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12:33 am
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Grape Study and The Power of Detail
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(This entry is somewhat germane to Sunday Scribblings prompt #181: "Hungry.")
On Saturday I spoke to the Florida Writers Association's Tampa chapter on "Harnessing the Power of Detail." The groceries I picked up on my way home included grapes.
They were so pretty that they inspired me to play with my food.
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Here I've trimmed, rotated, and duplicated/mirrored the original image.
The interplay of solid and shadow intrigued me after the grapes were eaten.
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So I thought I'd create a "rug."
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This image takes the preceding photo and matches its stem edge with that of a mirrored and reversed copy. I then applied MS Photo Editor's "Edge" and "Negative" functions and altered color balance and contrast. The background and frame come from copies of small patches taken from the altered image.
On Saturday morning I spoke to almost 25 people at the Carrollwood Barnes & Noble in Tampa. First, I presented and deconstructed examples of how detail is used in passages from published works in several different genres. The use of detail sets the scene, tone, and pacing of a piece and relates to what the author is trying to say. Which information advances the scene and enriches the story? How and where does the author focus the reader's attention?
My participatory talk included several exercises based on what I've done in my classes. One exercise reversed the dynamics of creating detail to add believability to a story. Instead of writing a narrative in which one invents details, I presented the group with a photograph showing four people preparing to launch a sailboat. I'd been part of that outing, now around 25 years ago, so I knew the people in the photo.
My handout page had two columns: "What is happening?" on the left and "Why?" on the right. I asked participants to describe, point by point, what was happening in the photo, to infer the relationships among the different characters, and then to write those assumptions in the left-hand column. Then, referring to body language, facial expression, line of sight, and environmental details -- those things that they could find in the photo itself -- they would justify their assumptions in the right-hand column.
No matter what the actual situation in the photograph, all guesses are legitimate if one has the details to back those guesses up. Interpretations of the photograph differed among participants, but each person used a different set of details to illustrate his or her assumptions. One participant likened the exercise to different stories provided by witnesses at a crime scene.
I also referenced Jeff Gerke's take on the "show versus tell" dictum, including his section, "When Exposition Works." And I drew from Naomi Epel's book The Observation Deck, one of my favorite writing guides.
After the meeting, several members took me to a terrific lunch at the Red Lobster across the highway.

Here I entertain the group by floating a lamp above my head. :-)
I misread my own directions duct-taped to the dashboard of my car and saw more of Tampa than I'd intended, but if I hadn't I wouldn't have seen a well-muscled, barechested man practicing his golf swing in the middle of a sandy highway construction zone -- one of those shots I wish I could have taken without getting into an accident. And I congratulated myself for finding an alternate route home without having to consult a map, so am getting to know the Tampa area a bit better.
Thanks to Kaye Coppersmith and the rest of the FWA Tampa chapter for a wonderful day!
I made two announcements at the meeting. One concerns the National Day on Writing, a project initiated by the National Council of Teachers of English.
 Click here to read the flyer.
Also, the Writer's Digest Conference occurred in New York City on the same day as my presentation, but people could follow along remotely, through both the conference blog and Twitter posts.
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Deep Carnivale 2009
 Festival check-in. I believe this and similar umbrella-motif art pieces shown below were done by Ernesto Piloto-Marquez.
On September 12, 2009, I traveled to Tampa's Ybor City for Deep Carnivale, along with Lakisha Spletzer and her daughter Alea. K.L. Nappier and I shared a sales table.
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01:11 pm
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Outer Alliance Pride Day

As a member of the Outer Alliance, I advocate for queer speculative fiction and those who create, publish and support it, whatever their sexual orientation and gender identity. I make sure this is reflected in my actions and my work.
As part of Outer Alliance Pride Day, members around the world are posting fiction or blog posts commenting on queer speculative fiction.Click on the banner to reach the main pride day page.

Jerry Wheeler covered Bram Stoker Award-winner Unspeakable Horror: From the Shadows of the Closet (Dark Scribe Press) over at Out In Print: Queer Book Reviews, in which he said (among much else):
"Out of 23 stories, you're bound to find one or two that suit you less than others, but Liaguno and Helder's batting average is pretty high. It's hard to beat Jameson Currier's Lovecraftian 'The Bloomsbury Nudes,' the pro-gay teenboy revenge scenario of Joy Marchand's 'Black Annis,' the beyond-the-grave poetry of Elissa Malcohn's 'Memento Mori' or the teen jack-off session gone horribly wrong in C. Michael Cook's 'The Boys of Bald Cave.'"
(emphasis mine)
Outside of the genre, my work has appeared in BiWomen (Boston Bisexual Women's Network), The Celibate Woman ("Notes On 'Celibate Bisexuality'"), and The Speaker (SpeakOut Boston).
My volunteer work includes but is not limited to facilitating meetings of PFLAG (Parents and Friends of Lesbians and Gays); helping to produce a live, call-in cable TV show for SpeakOut Boston; assisting at A Celebration Of Life, the Boston Living Center's Thanksgiving dinner provided to thousands of people living with HIV/AIDS; assisting at Gay and Lesbian Advocates and Defenders events; and producing the newsletter for and riding/fundraising in the first Boston-New York AIDS Ride.
I wrote the following on a GLBT bulletin board discussion of bisexuality over at Open Diary, back in August 2007:
I've been out as bi for 30 [now 32] years. I still identify as bi even though I've been in a monogamous lesbian relationship going on 12 [now going on 14] years and consider myself to be married. Because I have the *potential* to be with someone of any gender (gender is both complex and fluid). I've been intimate with both men and women and I've known people between the two. I look at the individual.
Here's an analogy. My father was straight. My mother was the only woman with whom he was intimate (she was the more experienced one), which was for 25 years until her death, after which he remained unattached for the remaining 20 years of his life. His passions lay elsewhere.
Being straight gave him the potential to be with "any" woman, but he wanted only one. Was he considered any less straight because he didn't "play the field"? No.
Being bi gives me the potential to be with both men and women. Does being devoted to one woman make me any less bi? No.
A dear friend of mine told me he "doesn't believe in bisexuality" because (he argued) why would someone want to subject themselves to unequal treatment when they could enter into a "traditional" relationship?
Because, given the right individual, the risks are worth it. One could apply that to lovers across class, across race, across politics. Sexual orientation has no monopoly on risk.
If, God/dess forbid, my partner died, and someone came along who captured my heart as deeply, that person could just as well be a man as a woman, or in an area between the two. It takes so much more than bodies to maintain a relationship. I've also lived a life of celibacy for years at a time, unattached to a partner, because being partnered wasn't important to me then. To everything there is a season.
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04:47 pm
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Listings, Thanks, In Memoriam

Thanks to Susan Crealock for including Covenant and Appetite on Online Novels. Listing page is here.
I'm a guest blogger today for the Florida Writers Conference. Topic: Watching Movies to Learn Our Craft. Thanks to Chris Hamilton for including the piece.
I'm now on the site for ZonaCon, slated for Orlando in late November. And the new Deep Carnivale (Tampa next month) site is finally up. I plan to have a vendor table there, though I don't yet know if I'll have a reading slot. Much of their schedule this year is devoted to special tributes. In-between those two, I'll be a guest and vendor at Necronomicon in St. Petersburg (FL) and am currently signing up for panels. Thanks to coordinators Marc Miller (ZonaCon), David Audet (Deep Carnivale), and Ann Morris (Necronomicon); to everyone involved with planning these events; and to K.L. Nappier, with whom I'm teaming up in all three.
Thanks to Julianne Draper at the Miami Examiner for doing another piece on me. (To be clear, the Hugo win is John Klima's, though I and many others were a part of that process.)
My story "Flotsam" is blurbed over at Asimov's as part of its October/November issue line-up.
And Dybbuk Press has its cover and Table of Contents up for She Nailed A Stake Through His Head: Tales of Biblical Terror.
I'm saddened by recent news that SF writer and poet Gene Van Troyer has died (1950-2009). I corresponded with him by snail mail in the early 80s, when I was first discovering science fiction poetry and the SFPA. At that time Gene was assistant editor at Star*Line. In 2007 he co-edited Speculative Japan (Kurodahan Press), an awesome anthology of Japanese speculative fiction, much of it published in English for the first time. He was a kind and generous human being and visionary. RIP, Gene. (SFWA obit here.)
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11:35 am
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Bonjour-hi! Worldcon Report

My report's this-a-way. (I know the Blogger hack for posting a snippet that can be enlarged to full, but I haven't been able to make that work here. And this is a long, photo-heavy report.)
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12:13 am
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Popping Over to Paranormality/Interview Transcript
 Phoenix Rising, from Lynda's blog.
Thanks to Lynda Hilburn for including my story in "Rising From the Ashes" (starting over in publishing) at her blog Paranormality. I'm in very good company over there. True tales of perseverance.
I've posted the transcript of my July 6 Conversations LIVE! interview over here. The podcast is still available here. Thanks again to Cyrus A. Webb for having me on the show.
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02:10 am
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We'Moon and Worldcon My contributor's copies of We'Moon 2010 have arrived:

My photo "Morning Ferns" forms the border around pgs. 72-3. Here's the original shot:

I've received my program schedule for Anticipation, the 67th World Science Fiction Convention:
* Reading with the members of Broad Universe, "an international organization with the primary goal of promoting science fiction, fantasy, and horror written by women." BU holds "Rapid Fire Readings" of about five minutes for each participant, to give audience members a smorgasbord of what members offer. (Friday Aug. 7, 10 AM)
* Poetry open mic competition, with fellow members of the Science Fiction Poetry Association. (Saturday, Aug. 8, 9 PM)
* Critiquing manuscripts in a writing workshop (described here). I've critiqued at local events and in several ongoing groups, but this will be the first time I'm doing so in a convention setting. (Sunday, Aug. 9, 1 PM)
* Signing. (Sun., Aug 9, 4 PM)
* Kaffeeklatsch -- being available for anyone who wants to talk, ask questions, etc. I've attended other people's Kaffeeklatsches, but this will be the first time I'm doing one, myself. (Monday, Aug. 10, 12:30 PM)
This will also be my first trip to Canada since 1982 (first trip to Montreal since 1981). I'm looking forward to reconnecting all 'round!
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01:44 am
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Podcast and Droplet I had a wonderful time on Conversations LIVE! with host Cyrus A. Webb. The show can be accessed here.
Errands followed, and I took this photo before the skies opened up. The droplet reflects other droplets hanging on other pine needles, on a path near our local animal clinic.

Large view
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02:48 pm
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Interview Coming Up at Conversations LIVE! On Monday, July 6, I'll be interviewed by host Cyrus A. Webb on Conversations LIVE!, Blog Talk Radio, at 1 p.m. Eastern Time. The show is sponsored by The Write Stuff Literacy Campaign.
Back on May 28, I was interviewed by Mark Eller, host of Chronicles, also on BTR. That show is now available as a podcast here and elsewhere.
As someone on dial-up, I know how it feels to wait through a download. With that in mind -- and to provide links to websites Mark and I mentioned, along with some accompanying photos -- I've transcribed the show, cleaning up some word repetitions and the like. Click here for the transcript.
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05:29 pm
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Contributor's Copies

Aoife's Kiss (Sam's Dot Publishing) is the latest contributor's copy to arrive. That's my name at lower left. (Grin)
My poem "Frightening the Horses" is inside. The poem is based on Lubov's painting "Daybreak," which can be seen here. For the second year in a row, Marge Simon and I had arranged to each write a poem based on something in the Necronomicon art show. The 2007 art show yielded poems that appeared in Space and Time #104. The 2008 art show produced "Frightening the Horses" and Marge's poem "Painting Tomorrow Man" (based on Garret Dechellis's "The Convector") -- one of two poems Marge has in this issue.
I also received Of Poets And Poetry, the newsletter of the Florida State Poets Association, which contains two of my poems. (The image below is a montage of material taken from three pages.)
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"The Unexpected Answer" (after this painting by Rene Magritte) won the FSPA's mini-contest at its "Spring Fling" meeting. "A door closing/a door opening" was the contest theme, with entries limited to 20 or fewer lines.
"Sijo Sequence for Larry" is a tribute to Larry Gross, who received the 2009 FSPA Guiding Light Award and who was honored at the event. Larry served as FSPA Webmaster and was in charge of our online forum. He was also the organization's Parliamentarian and founded the Big Bend Poets chapter, plus has written articles and given workshops. He is an expert in Asian poetic forms and is an all-around mensch. You can see some of Larry's poetry here.
I was the "Spring Fling" photographer and used tripod and auto-release to take the group shot. You can find me in the lower left-hand corner.
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Thank Yous
 Image from Rachel Baker's Old Musty Books website.
Several "thank you"s are in order:
Rachel Baker posted a lovely review of Covenant and Appetite on her site, Old Musty Books. You can read it here.
Among other things, she writes, "If you are looking for something different with a great story line, I would suggest reading these books. They are very well written and draw the reader into the story, possibly against their will."
I am also thankful to those reviewers who have been willing to consider these books. Covenant began its public life as a small-press trade paperback, but Appetite is a self-published e-book. Thank you to everyone who has agreed to step outside the box with me.
Thanks also go to Mark Eller, host of Chronicles (Blog Talk Radio). My May 28 interview with him is now available as a podcast here and on other podcast sites.
And thanks to Cyrus A. Webb, host of the Blog Talk Radio show Conversations LIVE! and founder of The Write Stuff Literacy Campaign, for inviting me to be his guest on July 6 at 1 PM Eastern Time.
I have behind-the-scenes thanks to give as well, related to my caregiver role. They include but are not limited to doctors, social workers, various staff support members, longtime "friends only" bloggers, and my own personal support network of good and caring friends. Words alone cannot adequately express how much you all mean to me.
Last but by all means not least, hearty congratulations go to editors Vince Liaguno and Chad Helder, fellow contributors, and everyone involved with Unspeakable Horror: From the Shadows of the Closet (Dark Scribe Press), winner of the Bram Stoker Award for Superior Achievement in an Anthology. You can see the announcement here. Click here to order the collection.
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Tags: appetite, bram stoker award, chronicles, conversations live!, covenant, cyrus a. webb, dark scribe press, interview, mark eller, old musty books, podcast, rachel baker, review, the write stuff literacy campaign, unspeakable horror
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